The Cartoonist Corner

I wrote my own Transformers pilot episode and I'm not quite sure if there IS anywhere i could share it, it is family friendly though

I guess an excerpt from "Betrayal" couldn't hurt:

"So, this is how I'm thanked. After all those years of friendship and love." Felix accused Ralph and Tammy. He had caught them kissing in the penthouse of Niceland. If it weren't for Ralph accidentally setting off Gene's Macarana records, they would have never been found. "Ralph... I trusted you! You promised me you wouldn't try anything with Tammy, and yet you betrayed me!"
"Felix... I-"
"Shut it Ralph!" Felix was exploding with anger now. Ralph immediately got quiet. Felix never showed any hostility to anybody, during or after hours. Felix turned to Calhoun.
"Honey... I didn't mean to do this..." She started to defend herself.
"Oh, so you fell into Ralph's arms and he accidentally kissed you?!" Felix yelled. She had toyed with his heart for the last time. He went to storm out of the room, but was stopped by Vanellope. The tiny racer's eyes were red with tears.
"You think only you've been crossed? You knucklebrains haven't done anything with me since that warthog started smooching Master Dweeb!" Everyone was taken aback. Sure, she insulted them all the time, but those were jokes. These were genuine insults. Ralph had enough of this. Stomping, he went to the patio window and started climbing down the building. Planning to stay with Zangeif for a whie, he started on his way to Street Fighter, even passing Tapper's on his way. He didn't feel like a root beer tonight.

I LOVE IT!

Thank you kindly.

Love how it sounds

If you can, I'd LOVE to read more of it

Nice piece of work!
Have you thought about putting up the story on fanfiction.net? (com, whatever it is?)
There's still plenty of folks out there reading fiction from older franchises, i bet you could get a bit of an audience.

^Hmm... Maybe.

Alright, I've been working on a story about Ralph needing to bring all the Infinity characters together, but I don't know if it will be a third person or first person story. I usually do third person so I can write more emotion, but I've always wanted to tinker with first person a bit...